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  Psychiatrist Dr. Peta Cassimatis 1414 Logan Rd Mt Gravatt, 4222 10/02/10 Dear Dr Cassimatis, Re: Ms Allison Martin, Age 28 years I am writing to refer this woman , whose clinical features are suggestive of schizophrenia and associated disorders. She would require further assessment and management. Always write patients  name in the introduction  Ms Martin is married, has 2 children aged 4 years and 10 month. She currently lives with her husband’s parents and has a family history of Schizophrenia. She initially presented on 09/01/10 complaining of poor health, tiredness and lack of motivation at work. She was then counselled on adequate rest and regular exercise. Three weeks later, her symptoms had worsened with poor concentration and attention to job activities. In addition, anxiety, frequent headaches and poor sleep were reported. Her mood was depressed and she maintained little eye contact. A probable diagnosis of early depression with schizophrenia was made. There...

  10 August,2021   The Director  Julia Farr Rehabilitation Centre  229,Fullarton Road   Dear Sir/Madam,   Re: Mr Alex Maydew,aged 23  I am writing to refer Mr Alex Maydew,who is recovering from neurological injuries.He requires ongoing  speech therapy, physiotherapy and possible continuation of online studies. Use appropriate verb.not all letters are referral letters. The purpose of the letter is to request to transfer Mr X to a new care facility.   Mr Maydew was admitted to the facility with a coma stage following a car accident for the 10 months  ago( giving a wrong meaning) . Subsequently, he has made good progress which evidenced by normal brain function; however, he  has loss of speech. Background information should be sufficiently explained.   Followingly, physiotherapy has been initiated in which mobility has improved. Mr Maydew showed  signs of depression ( reason for this) and his mother concerned about his rec...

Date  Todays date The Director , Julia Farr Rehabilitation Centre 229 Fullarton Road 509 Dear Sir/Madam,  Re: Mr . Alex Maydew, aged 23. I am writing in regards to Mr . Maydew who had a neurological injury . He requires follow-up care and assessment. This letter is being written to request further care and assistance for Mr X who has been treated here with respect to his neurological injuris. Mr. Maydew had a car accident 10 months ago. He has been normal brain function since 2 months ago . but he loses his speech facility . He is improving mobility with the help of physiotherapy and he is confined to a wheelchair. Background information  is lacking  He was in  coma state for 4 months in the hospital  and 4 months in our care facility and eventually woke up  from coma 2 months ago. He regained his normal brain function, however,   his speaking ability is affected.Currently,.... Though he is confined to the wheelchair, hia mobility is being imp...

  Dr  Pilar Dalfo  Endocrinologist  City Hospital  Easthampton  20 March, 2019.  Dear Dr Dalfo,  Re: Ms Maryam Hassan , 29 years.  I am writing to refer Ms Hassan  whose clinical features and laboratory finding are  suggestive of  hyperthyroidism. Your further investigations and management would be highly acknowledged.   Ms Hassan presented at our clinic on 27 February,2019 with complaints of a difficulty  in sleep  and stress at work place . In addition, a slight weight loss associated with headaches and eye dryness were reported. At that time , she was advised to reduce caffeine consumption and follow a proper sleep hygiene . Finish the para here.  A week later, in spite of compliance with her medical advice, she did not  show  improvement in her sleep pattern . Upon discussion, a sense of heart palpitation was documented .  ( Include palpation in assessment) On assessment, a blood pre...

  Dr  John McLennan Psychiatrist Royal Mental Health clinic   177 Park Avenue  Newtown  29 November , 2014 . Dear Dr McLennan,  Re: Ms Dolores Hoffmann                                      DOB : 22 June,1986.  I am writing to refer Ms Hoffmann  whose has been diagnosed with reactive depression and anxiety . Your expert management   would be highly acknowledged.  Ms Hoffmann  has attended our clinic multiple times due to different medical issues, which have been managed accordingly. In September 2004 she visited the clinic with symptoms of URTI along with anxiety regarding the Epstein Bar Virus. She has been advised to take a rest and reassured her regarding the anxiety. Ms Hoffmann presented at our clinic  on 22 November, 2014 with the complaints of  difficulty in  sleeping  associated with  a loss of enthus...

Dr Steph Sandy General Practitioner Phoenix Care Clinic Melbourne VIC 3876 13  March, 2011 Dear Dr Sandy, Re: Mr Eusalyn Phelan DOB: 13 March, 1976 I am writing to update the current health status of Mr Phelan who requires further follow-up care and management following his discharge today.He has been recuperating from a myocardial Infarction. Regular follow up visits and drug dosage adjustments are the purposes.  Although he has history of myocardial infarction, currently he has been diagnosed with heart failure secondary to recurrent myocardial infarction.  Mr Phelan was admitted to the  hospital on 03 March, 2011 due to breathlessness.On assessment, his blood pressure was elevated to 160/100mmHg along with weak pulse.In addition, he had mild piting ankle edema and inaudible heart sounds.Therefore,he was suspected to have congestive heart failure due to recurrent infraction forwhich ( two word) fruoemide 10mg, morphine and glyceryle nitrate 600mgb was were administ...

Dr Ian Robson Allergist Central Hospital Old town 17 June, 2018 Dear Dr Robson,  Re : Mr Tom Riddle, aged 20 I am writing to refer Mr Riddle who has been diagnosed with asthma.He requires investigations and identification of his allergies. Mr Riddle has a family history and childhood asthma;which has not been exacerbated for eight years.He also has periodic eczema. Try to avoid also Initially, Mr Riddle presented to the clinic with a two weeks history of breathlessness. Additionally, he had persistent cough and itching in his eyes.He reported, he sleeps on a dusty old carpet on the floor and has two cats in his home.His pre and post bronchodilater (spelling) test was positive to 20% which confirmed his diagnosis .Therefore, he has been prescribed oral prednisolone and inhaler.In - addition, he was advised for allergen management. Name and dose of the medications are  important On 14 June, 2018 Mr Riddle re visited [ one word ] with worsening of his symptoms; for that he use...

  RED   Irrelevant GREEN  correction PINK    suggestion Mr Steven Hummings Community Nurse  Community Health Centre  18 Gannon parade Newtown 24 January, 2015 Dear Mr Hummings, Re: Ms Belinda Hoyle, 37 - year- old Better to write age as 37 years  If you want to write like this, better to write when you have some other information also to add like a 37-year- old widow. I am writing to introduce Ms Hoyle , no comma who is recovering from type one fracture above the left elbow. She requires assistance for lifestyle and child care.   Ms Hoyle is being recovered from type one fracture above the left elbow following an accident. She requires rehabilitative care and lifestyle assistance from you service In your introduction purpose is not clear Ms Hoyle was admitted to our hospital on 21 January, 2015 with the above-mentioned diagnoses. fractured arm with little displacement of humerus following a scooter accident . On arrival, she was noticed...