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  Ms Marica Devonport West End Physiotherapy centre 62 Vulture street West End  Brisbane 4101 23 may 2008 Dear Ms Marica, Re: Mr Bob Dawson,DOB:25 September,1924 I am writing to refer Mr Dawson who has been dy with cerebrovascular accident ,who requires home visit to improve his mobility. Mentioning presenting complaint in intro will be good purpose would be clear Mr Dawson fell on 18 may 2008, while descending stairs. he had grazed on left leg knee.General practitioner  advised for daily visit from our facility to care for dressing and assist with showering. The wound redressed and no sign of infection. Dont present data in a bit by bit style. You have to make compound sentences  organise your information in the case note. Mr Dawson had Cardiovascular accident and recovery is uneventful .He has slight speech impairment and weakness on the left side . He is walking with his wife's support. He lives his own house with his wife on behalf of Mrs Elizabeth. In view ...

  23 May,2008 Ms Marcia Devonport West End Physiotherapy centre 62 Vulture street West End Brisbane 4101 Dear Devonport, Re:Mr Bob Dawson,DOB:25 September,1924 I am writing on behalf of Mrs Elizabeth Dawson to request a home visit for her husband ,Mr Dawson,who is recuperating from  the left knee injury.He requires co-ordiation of care and assistance for improving his ambulation. No need of on behalf of. purpose should be simple and clear physiotherapy needs should be written clearly. Mr Dawson presented on  18 May of this month following a fall  from the descending stairs and got a severe injury to the left leg. Consequently, general practitioner referred him to our care for performing dressing to the affected area and to help with activities of daily living . On subsequent visits,Mr Dawson regained a satisfactory recovery without any sign of infection.He is able to walk with the help of assistance; however,he has minimal pain. Based on the / Regarding the pas...

 3.VITAMIN D Vitamin D is a group of fat soluble vitamins responsible for intestinal absorption of calcium and phosphate.Two major forms of vitamin D exist. Vitamin D2 (ergocalciferol), found in plants, is produced by ultraviolet B irradiation of ergosterol and can be consumed as a supplement or in fortified foods. Vitamin D3 (cholecalciferol), on the other hand, a product of ultraviolet B irradiation of 7-dehydrocholesterol, is synthesised in the human epidermis or consumed in the form of natural (for example, fish) or fortified food sources or as a supplement. Supplementation with vitamin D has been shown to benefit skeletal conditions such as rickets, fractures, and falls,although a similar effect on bone mineral density was not evident in a recent review of trials.A growing body of evidence indicates that vitamin D may reduce risks of a wide range of diseases including multiple sclerosis, autoimmune disorders, infections, and cardiometabolic and cancer outcomes,indicating a pos...

TOBACCO CONTROL IN CHINA In 2003 China joined the World Health Organization Framework Convention on Tobacco Control (FCTC). The FCTC mandates a comprehensive set of tobacco control policies: surveillance and monitoring of the prevalence of tobacco use, creation of smoke-free environments, treatment of tobacco dependence, taxation on tobacco consumption and other price controls, and enforcement of health warnings on tobacco packages and marketing bans. China increased the tax on tobacco products at the producer and wholesale price level, with an average 11.7% increase in 2009. The tax increase did not, however, translate to higher retail prices experienced by consumers.Of smoke-free environment regulations, only a smoking ban on public transportation has been legislated. China implemented treatment programs for tobacco dependence and to some extent bans on advertising, but these are weakly enforced. Overall, the country profile for China in the WHO 2011 report on the global tobacco epid...

Mauscular Dystrophies. Muscular dystrophies are monogenetic diseases that are often characterized by the degeneration of both cardiac and skeletal muscle. Gene therapy to correct the mutated gene has shown promise in both animal models and clinical trials; however, current gene delivery strategies are limited to the introduction of the corrected gene into only one tissue. Strategies to target multiple striated muscle types would provide a much-needed improvement for the treatment of muscular dystrophies.  Muscular dystrophies are inherited genetic diseases that are particularly challenging from a therapeutic point of view. As striated muscles are formed by syncytial postmitotic cells that have limited or absent regenerative potential, muscle is not readily reconstructed. Moreover, the human body contains more than 600 striated muscles that are widely distributed, and these muscles control vital functions such as respiration, chewing and swallowing for food intake, and blood circula...

  19 July,2011 The MS Physiotherapy centre 588 Hay Street Subiaco Dear Sir/Madam, Re:Mr Stephen Mabel,DOB:18June,1972 I am writing on behalf of Mrs Sandra wife of,Mr Mabel,who is recuperating from the knee injury. He requires daily home visits for improving his ambulation. First sentence is confusing  No need to write that you are writing on behalf of his wife He needs only one home visit Mr Mabel presented on 12 June with a serious injury on the left knee following a fall from the descending stairs. Consequently, general practitioner referred him to our care for performing dressing to the affected area and help with activities of daily living . You have to write the complete date On subsequent visits,Mr Mabel attained a satisfactory recovery without any sign of infection.He is able to walk with the help of assistance ; , however,he has minimal pain. Good Based on the past medical history,Mr Mabel has had cerebrovascular accident in 2010.He also has slight slurred speech, im...

 

 1. The paragraph implies that A) financial implications of multidrug-resistant tuberculosis treatment B) effects of change from acquired to primarily transmitted disease. C) resistance to multidrug-resistant tuberculosis therapy. MULTIDRUG- RESISTANT TUBERCULOSIS. With an estimated 480 000 new cases developing every year,multidrug-resistant tuberculosis is one of the greatest public health challenges worldwide. Multidrug-resistant tuberculosis is much more common in patients who have previously been treated for tuberculosis,and public health efforts have typically focused on high-quality treatment of drug-susceptible tuberculosis to prevent acquisition of resistance while on therapy. However, a substantial proportion of patients with multidrug-resistant tuberculosis might have transmitted drug resistance (ie, present before treatment begins), and drug resistance is therefore often the cause of treatment failure, not the result. Several studies have illustrated how, as multidrug-re...

  1. WRITE CORRECT ADDRESS 2 PUT A CONMA  3.IT IS A REFER BACK 4. FOR IS BETTER THAN OF  5.USING THE SAME DATE FORMAT IS BETTER 6 PUT A COMMA AFTER THESE WORDS. 7 COMMA 8 OF NOTE IS OKAY BUT BETTER TO AVOID INTRODUCTION IS GOOD EXCEPT MINOR MISTAKES. The SECOND PARAGRAPH CONTAINS TOO MUCH INFORMATION. THEREFORE LACKS CLARITY. WRITE DETAILED POSTOPERATIVE CARE. IRRELEVANT INFORMATION IN PARAGRAPH 3 CURRENT DRESSING SHOULD BE MENTIONED EARLIER AS YOU ARE WRITING THE LAST PARAGRAPH AS  WHAT THE READER HAS TO DO FOR THE PATIENT. NO NEED OF MAY REMIND YOU  WRITE A SEPERATE LINE ABOUT  IF ANY QUERIES PLEASE CONTACT.

  10 November 2020  The General practitioner  Greystone General Practice  57 Sand Lane  Greystone  Dear Sir/ Madam, Re: Mr Jonathan Thompson ,DOB:01 August 1984  I am referring Mr Jonathan Thompson into your care for continued wound care and post- discharge monitoring owing to after her as he underwent incision and drainage procedure to treat his perianal abscess. refer or back into care? No need to write post discharge On 08 November 2020,Mr Thompson was admitted to hospital due to perineal abscess,as a result he underwent surgery under general anaesthesia.Post operatively he was managed by medication and dressing . Mr Thompson wound size is 2 cm long and 1.5 cm width.Presently, all observations are normal and no signs of infection. Have to mention the post operative management detaily Mr Thompson's wound size is noted at Mr Thompson was advised regarding his diet and he was informed not to take ibuprofen as long term. What diet Was he given ibupro...

  The General Practitioner Nurse Greystone General Practice 57 Sand Lane Greystone 10 November,2020 Dear Nurse , sir or madam Re: Mr Jonathan Thompson, DOB:01 August,1984 I am writing to request wound care and management for Mr Thompson. He is recovering from incision and drainage of perinial (spell check )abscess.   Better to write the presenting complaint first then, purpose of the letter. Avoid  mistakes in spelling. Mr Thompson was admitted on 08 November with the complaints of painful swelling and  pus collection near anus. On the next day, he underwent affor-mentioned surgery, which was uneventful . Post operatively,( single word ) he has been commenced on metronidazole 500 mg four times daily, which needs to be continued for five days.In addition, his wound was   managed with prontosan and kaltostat along with tegaderm.Currently, he has made good progress. Write only one one idea in one paragraph. If you are writing a care based letter organise your ...

  10 November,2020 The General practitioner Nurse Greystone General Practice 57 Sand Lane Greystone Dear Sir/Madam, Re:Mr Jonathan Thompson,DOB:01 August,1984 I am writing to refer Mr Thompson who is recuperating after incision and drainage of for perianal abscess.He requires continuity of care and management, after his discharge today. Mr Thompson was admitted to hospital on 08 November,2020 with the complaints of painful swelling near the anus along with pus collection.On assessment,vital parameters were normal expect temperature and blood pressure noted at 37.6 and 149/80 respectively . In addition,the pus appeared slight yellow in colour without any offensive odour . On the next day Thus,he underwent the aforementioned surgery on 09 November,2020 and was successful. Good paragraph but no need to write all of these information  Our task is to constrain the information without losing the important data  Post-operatively, he made a good recovery without any complicatio...