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A BETTER PRESENTATION FOR BRUCE BREW

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READING A MODEL LETTER WILL ALWAYS HELP TO WRITE A GOOD LETTER!

WRITING ALWAYS INCLUDE READING AND CORRECTION . PRACTICE THIS LETTER AND FIND OUT THE CORRECTIONS. WHAT I SUGGEST IS THAT YOU MAKE A SRATEGY TO DO WRITING. YOU MAY BE ABLE TO SELECT RELEVENT CASE NOTES BUT MAY NOT BE ABLE TO FORM ORGANISE SENTENCES. LOOK A LETTER  IN DEFFERENT  WAYS ... FOR CASE NOTE CLICK BELOW BRUCE BREW

CORRECT A LETTER

 CORRECTING A LETTER IS ALSO IMPORTENT IN OET WRITING .   I HAVE MADE A FORMULA FOR CORRECTION THAT YOU CAN FOLLOW WHILE WRITING ITSELF. IN MY WORD  I DESCRIBED IT AS "PT SCAN" THAT  DO SCANNING AFTER EACH PARAGRAH  WAS WRITTEN. AND IN THIS    P  -  CHECK  FOR PUNCTUATION    T - CHECK FOR TENSE INCLUDING PASSIVE FORM    S - CHECK FOR SPELLING    C- CHECK FOR CAPITALS    A-  CHECK FOR ARTICLES    N- CHECK FOR NUMBERS  - SINGULAR- PLURAL, SUBJECT VERB AGGREMENT  REWRITE THIS LETTER AND COMMET US BELOW.. FOR CASE NOTE PLEASE CLICK BELOW MONICA OSBURN

BeverleyWilliams

BeverleyWilliams        Born1943 PATIENT This patient has been in your care   for the   past 10 y ears.During the past 8years Mrs  Williams has developed diabetes. It is  not  well co ntrolled.         You are now referring  her on to a Public Health Nurse   for a   health educa tion program. HISTORY �   TypeIINonInsulinDependentDiabetes–onset8yearsago �   Prescribed tablets soon afterdiagnosis �   No problems with sugars orinfections �   Has monitored urine with sticks athome �   Not always wellcontrolled �   Does not care about dietregime �   HighBPforpast5years–onmedication �   Overweight for past 30 years (BMI32) �   VisionOK �   Has worn spectacles for past 20years �   GrandmotherhadDiabetes;diedofgangreneofthefoot �   Husband is alsoDiabetic ...

Alexander Jones

The Community Nurse Supervisor The Community Nurse Centre Ash field 10 June 2006 Re: Mr. Alexander Jones, 65-year-old Dear Community Nurse Supervisor, Mr. Jones, who has had a surgery of basal cell carcinoma of left calf, is being referred to your centre for follow-up care and management. Post-operatively, his wound was managed well and there were no complications. However, dressing should be continued. He performs his daily activities alone. He walks with the help of crutches. He performs exercise regularly. He smokes not more than 10 cigarettes a day and drinks beer daily. However, he does not have any previous hospitalization. It would be highly appreciated, if you could continue his medications along with dressings and assess need for other services. In case of emergency, you can contact his ex-wife Mrs. Volga, her address is enclosed. Yours sincerely, Charge Nurse.     Please evaluate...and mistakes please mention in commen...

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Sample Letter Alfred Billy.

05 May 2010 The Community Nurse Head Care well Hospital Birmingham Re: Mr. Alfred Billy, 52-year-old Dear Community Nurse Head, Mr. Billy, who has had a surgery for basal cell carcinoma of neck, is being referred to your centre for follow-up care and management. On 21/03/2010, he was admitted to our hospital for a skin biopsy. Biopsy was done and was sent for pathological studies.   There were no complications noted. He dose not have any pain; and now he is perfectly alright. He is on Pandamin forte 500 mg. He has been consuming liquor for past 30 years and he smokes regularly. Even though, he did not hospitalized previously. It would be highly appreciated, if you could observe him and continue his medications one more week. In case of any emergency, you can contact Mrs. Billy, her address is enclosed. Yours sincerely, Charge Nurse. ( please to correct it . its for evaluation .please comment your corrections below.)

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