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Dr Ian Robson Allergist Central Hospital Old town 17 June, 2018 Dear Dr Robson,  Re : Mr Tom Riddle, aged 20 I am writing to refer Mr Riddle who has been diagnosed with asthma.He requires investigations and identification of his allergies. Mr Riddle has a family history and childhood asthma;which has not been exacerbated for eight years.He also has periodic eczema. Try to avoid also Initially, Mr Riddle presented to the clinic with a two weeks history of breathlessness. Additionally, he had persistent cough and itching in his eyes.He reported, he sleeps on a dusty old carpet on the floor and has two cats in his home.His pre and post bronchodilater (spelling) test was positive to 20% which confirmed his diagnosis .Therefore, he has been prescribed oral prednisolone and inhaler.In - addition, he was advised for allergen management. Name and dose of the medications are  important On 14 June, 2018 Mr Riddle re visited [ one word ] with worsening of his symptoms; for that he use...

  RED   Irrelevant GREEN  correction PINK    suggestion Mr Steven Hummings Community Nurse  Community Health Centre  18 Gannon parade Newtown 24 January, 2015 Dear Mr Hummings, Re: Ms Belinda Hoyle, 37 - year- old Better to write age as 37 years  If you want to write like this, better to write when you have some other information also to add like a 37-year- old widow. I am writing to introduce Ms Hoyle , no comma who is recovering from type one fracture above the left elbow. She requires assistance for lifestyle and child care.   Ms Hoyle is being recovered from type one fracture above the left elbow following an accident. She requires rehabilitative care and lifestyle assistance from you service In your introduction purpose is not clear Ms Hoyle was admitted to our hospital on 21 January, 2015 with the above-mentioned diagnoses. fractured arm with little displacement of humerus following a scooter accident . On arrival, she was noticed...

  Letter-28 08 April,2018 Dr Hank Farquad The diabetic nurse educator Endocrine specialist and associate 115,Burke st.Omaha Dear Dr.Farquad, Re:Ms Tabitha Taborlin , 45 years I am  writing to refer Ms.Taborlin , who has been diagnosed with Type 1 diabetes mellitus , requires stricter glycemic control and possible insulin pump( the purpose of the letter is not that one) .She is being discharged today. Purpose of the letter is deviated  That means, the whole letter went wrong. Ms Taborlin was admitted on 02 April,2018 with the complaints of Diabetic keto acidosis.Her glucose level were/ was recorded  as 530 mmol/ l.She was treated with intravenous fluids and insulin administration .Her HbA1C level is stabilized currently. this paragraph is okay. Ms.Taborlin is school teacher ,lives alone and dose not exercise at all .( Irrelevent data) Her past medical history reveals essential hypertension, Type 1 diabetes mellitus for which she is non compliance with insulin regim...