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LETTER 2

 No 2 -15/08/2020


Dr Iran[spell check] Robson 

Allergist 

Central Hospital 

Oldtown 


17 June, 2018


Dear Dr Robson, 


Re: Mr Tom Riddle 

DOB: 19 May, 1998


Mr Tom Riddle, who was has been diagnosed with asthma, requires further testing and identification of his allergies. 


While writing was diagnosed you mean that his asthmatic problem is not an issue at present.


Initially, Mr Riddle presented with breathlessness, persistent coughing, wheezing and eyes itching. On the subsequent day, his examination revealed pre and post brochodilator[spell check] FEV1 as 3.61 and 4.35 respectively; for which, oral prednisone, albuterol inhaler and symbicort were prescribed. After 12 days, he revisited with flared up asthma and eczema; therefore, he was administered with 3-litre oxygen, albuterol and corticosteroid injection. Today, he was educated regarding the environmental triggers and proper inhaler technique. 


  • Itchy eyes.

  • Albuterol injection -wrong information

  • Today, he is educated 


Mr Riddle has childhood asthma, which has no episodes for eight years. He also has periodic eczema. His new accommodation has a dirty old carpet and he sleeps on the floor. Additionally, he has two cats. 


  • Information is wrongly placed.

  • Family history of asthma is very important information.


It would be greatly appreciated if you could provide guidance on environmental management and allergenic testing. 

  • Not guidance for allergen test. need to do the real test.


Kindly contact me for further queries. 


Yours sincerely, 


Registered Nurse



  • Some information is wrongly written.

  • Concentrate on the task 

  • Organise the letter 

  • Try to write a simple letter

  • Best of luck!!!

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