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LETTER 1

 Letter 01   (22/08/2020)



19 August,2011


MS Physiotherapy Center

588 Hay Street Subiaco

(08)93882877


Dear Sir/Madam,

leave space here

Re: Mr Stephen Mabel

DOB:18(space)june,1972


Mr Mabel requires a home visit from your service to improve his mobility. Your continued care and management would be highly appreciated.

Good introduction!!


Initially, Mr Mabel presented to health care agency with severe headache, left knee injury following a fall from stairs for which,she was treated with dressing and assisted him to do activities of daily living.On 15 August,2011 Mr Mabel visited to our center for redressing the wound.which was healing well and no signs of infection noted.He was is able to walk short distance with the  help of his wife.


  • Health care agency is neither a hospital nor a clinic

  • She was first attended by GP

  • Headache was the reason for her fall

  • Gp requested for dressing and assistance in shower

  • Health care agency is also doing home visits

  • His wife needs more home visits



Today,Mr Mabel attended to our center with good healing progress.Therefore,He was advised to walk with walking sticks (is it because he has good healing progress??).Apart from this,His wife ,Sandra, requested a home visit for continued care in his mobility.


Mr Mabel has a history of cerebro vascular accident 2years ago.He has slurred speech and impaired balance.Please note, he walks with a limp.


In this regard,it would be greatly appreciated if you could provide continued care and support to improve his walking (mobility).His address is 8 Sturat Street,Perth,WA6000


Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any queries.


Yours faithfully,

Senior Nurse

Joanna Andrews

Health Care Agency


  • Read The case note properly 

  • Starting of this letter was good 

  • Best wishes!!

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