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LETTER 24

No 24


Dr Hank Farquad

Certified Diabetes Educator

Endocrine Specialists and Associates

115, Burke St Omaha


08 April ,2018


Dear Dr Farquad,


Re : Ms Tabitha Taborlin,45 years


I am writing to refer Ms Taborlin who has type 1 diabetes since for 7 years. She  requires, education regarding glycemic control measures and insulin pump usage.


  • Wrong purpose


Ms Taborlin is an underweight female currently on 45 units of  Lantus at night and 12 units Humalog .She has had multiple episodes of diabetic ketoacidosis.On 02 april ,2018  she was admitted with glucose level 530 mmo/L and was treated with insulin and iv fluids.


On Today's appointment, she is doing found to be well since discharge. However, she is not compliant with insulin and using insulin and not following the recommended diet. Therefore , she is educated about the necessity of glucose testing, insulin administration and smoking cessation. In addition, discussed her about various complications of diabetes and provided educational pamphlets and refills for insulin injections.


Ms Taborlin is a school teacher living alone in her apartment.she is having a habit of smoking. She has hypertension.

  • She has a habit of smoking 


It would be greatly appreciated, if you could educate her regarding further(incomplete sentence)


Please do not hesitate to contact me for any queries.


Yours sincerely,

Leave space

Registered Nurse

First Family care

3959 Abalone Lane

Omaha

  • Task deviated 

  • Read the case notes as much as you can

  • Plan the letter properly

  • Not necessary to write a certified diabetic educator

  • Best of luck!!

  • Team OET4U

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